hot day
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- Sep, 20, 2019
- By 康江涛 康江涛
- 我的英语写作
- It is very hot today! The temperature outside is 35 degree. After school hours, my child rushes in home and opens the fridge to look for something to drink.He finds a bag of yogurt and so he cuts it with a scissors. When he sucks the yogurt, he accidentally spills a little of it on his right hand then he quickly licks it with his tongue. Despite that, he is still feeling the heat. So he takes a watermelon and cuts it with a knife. He feels comfortable after eating two pieces of it.
I like your story. Very clear, and interesting too. I can see every scene and action clearly in my mind. Well written!