Nowadays, I am very busy with my work, and I stay up late. There is so much work to do during the day, so I  must do my things and stay up late. I don’t know if you guys have this feeling or not that you are pleased when you have company when you stay up late.

Now, I use ChatGPT to help me modify this paragraph.

Revised Version:
Nowadays, I am very busy with work and often stay up late. There is so much to do during the day that I have to handle my own tasks at night. I wonder if you’ve ever felt pleased to have someone keeping you company while staying up late.

Key Changes:

1. “my work” → “work”

   • “Work” is general and doesn’t require “my” unless you’re emphasizing personal tasks.

2. “and I stay up late” → “and often stay up late”

   • Adding “often” clarifies the frequency of staying up late.

3. “must do my things and stay up late” → “have to handle my own tasks at night”

   • More natural phrasing for describing personal responsibilities.

4. “I don’t know if you guys have this feeling or not” → “I wonder if you’ve ever felt”

   • Polished phrasing and a smoother question structure.

5. “you are pleased when you have company” → “pleased to have someone keeping you company”

   • More idiomatic and concise.