diary

这是我今天练习写作的日记,请老师和同学们点评(自己觉得有好多错,关于时态的)。

There  is  a   cat   and   there   is   a   table   in  my   room  .   The  cat  walk  to   the   table   ,Then  ,  Lie  down  on  the   floor  under  the   table  ,It  close   its   eyes .It   seem   die  .  Then  I   rub  the  table   top  ,The  cat   stand  up  ,Then  ,  Jump  forward  the   wall  of  the   room   and   hit   the   wall.

2 Responses so far.

  1. 蔡溢滨 蔡溢滨 says:

    its esay to understand what you had wrote. very well

  2. yc says:

    很好的尝试。你把L2B的单词和短句写成故事。 Good!

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